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人的记忆力会随着岁月的流逝而衰退,写作可以弥补记忆的不足,将曾经的人生经历和感悟记录下来,也便于保存一份美好的回忆。那么我们该如何写一篇较为完美的范文呢?下面是小编为大家收集的优秀范文,供大家参考借鉴,希望可以帮助到有需要的朋友。
2.不熟或尊敬的人:称呼常用:dear mr./ms./prof. + 对方姓 名,结束语一般使用kind regards/ yours sincerely
3.熟人或者朋友:称呼常用:dear + 名,结束语一般使用best wishes/kind regards
此文适用于第三种情况。
一般小作文分3-4段即可,而具体分段并不用特别复杂,在实战中不须话费太多时间,完全参照题目要求即可,所以此文如题目要求正文段一共分为三段。
第一段:学习计划。共三句话。当前状态+求学信息+学习目的
此三者是笔者课上反复强调的学习类话题的黄金三角之一,大家必须牢记于心在任意的此类文章中都逃不出此法则。
词句学习:文中:my departure date for new zealand is drawing near. draw near 解释为临近 可与 常用的 close 或这 approach 替换。
词句学习:文中:to assist in covering the costs of my study, i am to find a part-time job. 此句解释需要找工作的原因是要承担学费。但句中抛开了because之流的烂俗的因果类连接词,而直接选择用不定式结构在句首直抒胸臆。写法顺畅地道,鲜有中文的痕迹。此类表目的或原因的写作方式在很多分析过的考官范文中都有出现,须受到重视。
另文中:not only are the college fees rather high, but also i know that rental accommodation in the capital city will not be cheap, to say nothing of food and heating expense! 此句中一连三个并列,分别由not only(不仅)+ 倒装句… but also(而且)+陈述句…to say nothing of(更不用说)+名词 … 此并列结构建议大家可以多多练习仿写。
第三段:工作内容+提出请求
此段比较典型提出相关工作要求请求帮助,并表示感谢即可。此段和课上讨论常见的收尾段结构几乎一致。
以上就是小站老师为雅思考生们带来剑桥雅思10g类写作考官范文解析,希望能给雅思考生们带来帮助,不过雅思写作的唯一提升方法就是多写哦。
随着手机拍照的流行,大家应该都已经快忘记可以冲洗的照片的珍贵了吧,偏偏我们的最新雅思口语机经中出现了这样的话题卡,为了防止大家在回答雅思口语的过程中说“跑偏”到手机内存中的照片,我们可以在开头的介绍中就提到相框 frame,胶卷film, 悬挂hang 这类的词。这样给考官的最初印象就是你完全理解了题目的要求。
下面就以撒狗粮的方式,看看雅思口语里介绍照片的套路:
for the favorite picture i have in my room is the one with my boy friend and i smiling in front of the disneyland park. it is put right on the wall facing my bed so every time i lie down i can remember those moments.
the memories still come to me that the photo was taken on a rainy night when everything seemed dim in the distance and noises were replaced by the profound serenity of raindrops.
we had a great time at the carousel with many other couples taking photos of each other. and minute upon minute, note upon note, the little horses would go up and down.
when the music faded out and the fantastic tour came to its end, the dark night sky was kindled by fireworks rising behind the disney castle where all fairy tales dwelled in. those dancing images of mascots were projected on the castle, reviving the happy moments although the fact that the park was closing soon made us a little sad.
but at least we still have the photo. it is always reminiscent of that lovely time at the park and i believe there are more happy moments to be filmed with us together.
本篇中我选择了一些稍难但”含情脉脉”的词在雅思口语中表达情感。要知道说的越真实,细节越多,越能打动考官获得高分
1. dim: (light) not bright
ie: this light is too dim to read by
2. serenity:the quality of being calm and peaceful
ie: the hotel offers a haven of peace and serenity away from the bustle of the city
3. fade out: to become less clear or quieter
ie: fade out the music at the end fo the scene
4. reminiscent: remind you of somebody/something
ie: the way he laughed was
人物topic大致分为这么几种:
a friend: a happy person, one you want to travel/study/work with, one you admire……
a celebrity: sport/movie/music star, a famous person you admire, a successful person, a character from a tv program or a movie.
a family member: one who influenced you most, one you like best, a happy person, an old person.
else: child, teacher, neighbor
先从一个例子入手,来说一说人物这一类topic的特点和重要性。
题目:describe a celebrity you admire.
example by edward:
explain: who is this celebrity? what has he/she done to become popular? why do you like him/her?
when this topic is regarded/as the topic is mentioned (一般我都会用这两句开头,当然你也可以自己想一个开头方式), i would say a celebrity whom i admire most is the former chinese gymnast who is named li ning (有时候最好的回答方式就是重复对方的问题) . before i start, i do want to remind you that he is the man who lighted up the primary torch in beijing olympic game 2008.
li ning is no doubt one of the greatest athletes in china owing to his great contribution to gymnastics. as a gymnast, li ning demonstrated exceptional talents and perseverance/fortitude (天赋与坚毅品质)that his contemporaries didn’t possess(替换have可以展现你的词汇量). in los angeles summer olympic games, he won 4 gold medals, which was the best performance in that game. the next year, he won another two in world gymnastic games. prior to beijing olympics, he still held a record of 14 champion titles in gymnastics. in his days, he barely can find a competitor. so this good-looking young man has often been called the prince of gymnastics.
having retired from his beloved game (这句话完全等于after he retired from his beloved game), li ning still continued his passion in the field of sports by establishing a sport wear company which was named after him. the company soon became an unprecedented success. presently, the brand li ning has become a main competitor that nike and addidas can not ignore in the global market.
another reason i admire him is that li ning is not just a normal businessman who only cares about money, but also a man responsible for the future of the whole nation (我常用这句话来形容商人-xxx说:企业家身上应当流着道德的血液。). he often donates money to communities and the national educational program called hope plan. so everything he does can be used as positive demonstration for the youth.
therefore……
这个答案回答完,第二部分8分应该是不成问题了。这个topic要说完可能需要3分钟,所以在考场上必然会被考官打断-因为这部分给定时间在1-2分钟。但是并不用担心,因为考官会告诉你:don’t worry if i stop you.
人物topic是所有topic中最基本的一项。它是应该要优先考虑的一项,所以应该充分准备(一个人经验,要准备5个不同类型的人物)。原因很简单。很多topic都会和它相关联。当你试着把其他topic和人物联系起来时,准备口语的topic就变得轻松了许多。
试想,当你说一个物品,比如gift, 或者一次经历,比如travelling的时候,把它和你的好朋友或者是家人联系起来。准备就变得很有效率,回答时也可以避免没话说的灾难发生。
大作文考官范文8个话题分类如下:
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